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shaggy
New Member

since 2008-04-17

Posts 9

0 posted 2008-04-17 12:11 PM

Summer went by languid
With my thoughts
Stuffed in a tiny suitcase
Fitted with brown leather
And tiny golden clasps
With one word engravings on each
That read “Love” and “Fierce”.
And I tear myself from the
Sticky sweet of my reverie
Only to be reminded of the night
You said let’s go for a swim.
And how I looked over at the moonlight
Casting ghosts on the glass
Of the black lake and I saw your
Silhouette cast aside synthetic skin.
With my—
Pulse quickening
Heart pounding
Mouth dry
Hands sweating
Eyes burning
Knees trembling
Tongue tumbling
Gut aching
I watched your bare shoulders
Caught in the moonbeams
Part the dark glass.
Your lips froze my heart
With the words “Love Fierce”
And I moved fervently to you with
My muscles tense
I stopped and I lifted
Your polka dot dress laying
Like a broken willow on the banks
And all I could do was hesitate and
Stuff your words in my suitcase.

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-17 01:16 AM

A very warm welcome to this wonderful land PIP. Wonderful poem of deep romance. enjoyed the read.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2008-04-17 09:34 AM

Wow...this is a

for me. Great
imagery...

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" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2008-04-17 10:51 AM

HelloShaggy~
Love that moniker~

WELCOME to PiP~
Enjoyed the read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2008-04-17 11:15 AM

welcome to PIP

great first post!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2008-04-18 04:08 PM

Nice writiing...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2008-04-19 02:49 AM

oh my! that was a great entrance to our pages blue!

Welcome, I look forward to reading more of your work... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2008-04-20 04:43 PM

Welcome to the site, Shaggy. Love your first post.
Ida

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

8 posted 2008-04-20 11:15 PM

Wow! This is awesome Shaggy… Beautiful and inviting.

Tammy<333

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