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Open Poetry #42

A Less Than 20

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2008-02-04 06:39 AM

In the darkness
of the morning hours
yesterday thoughts
become today's,
reaching out for truth
to soften the ache.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-02-04 06:43 AM

Maureen... I love your beautiful words! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2008-02-04 07:45 AM

make some new thoughts, leave yesterday's where they are

I love your less than 20s

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2008-02-04 03:08 PM

Sending you hugs, my friend.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2008-02-04 04:06 PM

Fabulous...James

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2008-02-06 09:15 PM

Deeply true and perfect, my friend.

jwesley

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2008-02-06 09:48 PM

Beautifully put

ARCTIC WIND

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

7 posted 2008-02-06 09:53 PM

Nakdthoughts,

The poem is well written, and just fine.

I don't understand the title.

Bobby

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2008-02-07 08:40 AM

Bobby, there is a poet on here who specializes in "less than poems"
(MARK V SHELDON)
...meaning less than 20 words or 10 or whatever he chooses. I like to let him know that occasionally I enjoy writing the less thans also.

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