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I Wait
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I Wait |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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I Wait For that first kiss of the day The smile that makes me stay I wait for the smell of you perfume My very heart does it consume And still I wait for the talk late at night Holding hands has felt so right And still i wait For your soft caress bestill my soul my pains are less And still i wait For you to realize no more fond heart has gazed your eyes Still i wait To stand on my one knee Your hand i ask to marry me For when the time does come to pass When strayed thoughts are gone at last When i feel i do is in your heart i'll give to you my all and not just part Of everything i have for true My love and hope i feel renew I'll stop this wait and marry you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well, in any case, I'm rootin' for ya!  |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
wow good. But don't wait. enjoyed reading your poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Very nicely wrought. You must be a very patient person. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Richard.. this was a beautiful read.. thank you love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Mountain Goat Junior Member
since 2008-04-06
Posts 32High Places |
Nice one |
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