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Open Poetry #42

Just taking a dip....

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2008-04-16 08:20 PM

She combs my beach
   for seashells - afraid
   to get her feet wet;

Her father disapproves of
   sandy prints across his rug.

"You inspire; I desire – and refrain; you sustain."

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

1 posted 2008-04-16 09:28 PM

The essence of simplicity. Well written, thanks for the pleasure of reading your work.
sharyn

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-04-16 10:17 PM

Topheth,

A wise father indeed.

Bobby

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

3 posted 2008-04-17 12:53 PM

quite marvelous. I like this one.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2008-04-17 08:10 AM

Topheth~
So good to see you again~

I like the softness of these thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2008-04-17 11:19 AM

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