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Open Poetry #42

2 More Haiku

ilsm
Member

since 2008-04-13

Posts 61
UK

0 posted 2008-04-16 07:35 PM

1. Spring

Spring's shining brightness drives out cold shades of Winter.
I walk in the sun.

2. On a poem by Robert Frost

Precious first moments
Of Spring, Paradise and Dawn:
Nothing gold can stay.

Footnote: 'Nothing Gold Can Stay' is one of Robert Frost's more famous poems. Written in 1923, this poem was published in The Yale Review in October of that year. Some say the poem helped Frost to win a Pulitzer Prize. Only eight lines long, this poem is still considered one of Frost's best. (Source Wikipedia)

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-17 01:01 AM

very good.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2008-04-17 03:56 AM

It could have been :

nothing cold can stay

thank you for sharing

yann

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