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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2008-04-16 03:19 PM




Eastern day moon played
Double-dutch with live phone wires
Ignoring cell needs



© Copyright 2008 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
shyvl
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1 posted 2008-04-16 03:54 PM


Communication becomes more difficult with new advancement.  Your ability to make me ponder life with your verse is due to the many layers of meaning I always sense between the lines.  It was a pleasure to read and reflect upon.
sharyn

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2 posted 2008-04-17 04:39 AM


Enjoyed...James
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3 posted 2008-04-17 11:20 AM


love this!
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4 posted 2008-04-17 12:10 PM


Karilea~
Nice circle of thoughts in this Senryu~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2008-04-17 01:34 PM


Made me smile, ya did!!
2islander2
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6 posted 2008-04-17 04:05 PM


I'm glad to learn a new word: double dutch

thank you for your poem...

   yann

Larrysmom
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7 posted 2008-04-17 10:56 PM


Wow Sunshine, this is amazing and beautiful. So very much within a glimpse.

Tammy<333


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8 posted 2008-04-18 12:07 PM


I would be disingenuous if I said I understood this clever write, but I would be truly ungrateful if I did not express my deep appreciation for your mastery...
Martie
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9 posted 2008-04-18 12:59 PM


Sissie....your image is full of the wonder that time brings to the constant movement of the heavens.  Enjoyed!  
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10 posted 2008-04-24 10:59 AM


This is a good one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AAB
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11 posted 2008-04-24 01:55 PM


i loved it every one should ignore there phone every once in a while and go enjoy life! I can't skip double dutch but I can skip to 100!.. at least I think I still can..
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12 posted 2008-04-30 12:21 PM


enjoyed
gilead
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13 posted 2008-04-30 02:39 PM


An economy of verse packed with meaning--- Quite an accomplishment!

Art

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14 posted 2008-04-30 03:46 PM


ouuu I liked this one! SunShine



ARCTIC WIND

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15 posted 2008-05-01 12:33 PM


Yep, I agree that this is wonderful.  You done good there, darlin'.  Sometimes it is nice to escape some of our more annoying technological improvements!

xoxoxo
A

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16 posted 2008-05-01 06:50 AM


So true!
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