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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2008-04-16 03:19 PM

Eastern day moon played
Double-dutch with live phone wires
Ignoring cell needs

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

1 posted 2008-04-16 03:54 PM

Communication becomes more difficult with new advancement. Your ability to make me ponder life with your verse is due to the many layers of meaning I always sense between the lines. It was a pleasure to read and reflect upon.
sharyn

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-04-17 04:39 AM

Enjoyed...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2008-04-17 11:20 AM

love this!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2008-04-17 12:10 PM

Karilea~
Nice circle of thoughts in this Senryu~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2008-04-17 01:34 PM

Made me smile, ya did!!

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2008-04-17 04:05 PM

I'm glad to learn a new word: double dutch

thank you for your poem...

yann

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

7 posted 2008-04-17 10:56 PM

Wow Sunshine, this is amazing and beautiful. So very much within a glimpse.

Tammy<333

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2008-04-18 12:07 PM

I would be disingenuous if I said I understood this clever write, but I would be truly ungrateful if I did not express my deep appreciation for your mastery...

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2008-04-18 12:59 PM

Sissie....your image is full of the wonder that time brings to the constant movement of the heavens. Enjoyed!

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

10 posted 2008-04-24 10:59 AM

This is a good one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AAB
Member

since 2008-04-10

Posts 99
Canada

11 posted 2008-04-24 01:55 PM

i loved it

every one should ignore there phone every once in a while and go enjoy life! I can't skip double dutch but I can skip to 100!.. at least I think I still can..

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2008-04-30 12:21 PM

enjoyed

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

13 posted 2008-04-30 02:39 PM

An economy of verse packed with meaning--- Quite an accomplishment!

Art

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

14 posted 2008-04-30 03:46 PM

ouuu I liked this one! SunShine

ARCTIC WIND

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

15 posted 2008-05-01 12:33 PM

Yep, I agree that this is wonderful. You done good there, darlin'. Sometimes it is nice to escape some of our more annoying technological improvements!

xoxoxo
A

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

16 posted 2008-05-01 06:50 AM

So true!

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