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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. There is dirt Under my nails And my dead father says So what . |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Just LOVED THIS!!! jimmy |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, Your dead father was correct. Dirty hands mean you have been working. No one should ever try to hide their hands. Bobby |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
All you need to do is to wash your hands. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. My dead father is inportant to me so take care . . . John . |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
My father will ask me to wash hands after So what. I read it as a recollection of a conversation between father and child. I am sorry if I have been offending you, dear John. Have a nice evening. I understand what you said. You have written some poems about your father. |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
This wisdom of our fathers serves as a good reality check. What's really important- alittle dirt under your nails- Who cares. Thanks for the pleasure I loved the simplicity of your writing and the many layers of meaning found in your verse. sharyn |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks for your poem yann |
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