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Open Poetry #42

Missing You

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2008-04-15 04:59 PM

"I miss you" -
My cold lips scream out in whisper,
I miss you,
The beautiful sorrow, hidden,
Each time when you said I was hopeless.
I miss it.
I miss giving in to the feeling, forbidden.

When there was no need to keep things under control,
When every "goodbye" meant "I'll see you". This story
However, has come to an end, and instead of
True "Yes, you're forgotten" you say simply "sorry".

The fibre that keeps my heart caged have been soaked
In poison of love, or, as I say, attraction.
It's blinded me utterly, but every road
I choose is to lead me in just one direction -

Your arms. If I follow my mind or temptation,
My dream or the calling of every day, wasted,
The memory, painful, or anticipation,
I'll still come to you, and we both can't escape it.

"I miss you" -
The sound's dissolved in the air.
I make one more breath,
And the things take their places.
"I miss you" -
I swallow the words in despair,
But time in your heart is erasing the traces.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2008-04-15 05:29 PM

Nice wriiting...James

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

2 posted 2008-04-15 05:42 PM

""I miss you" -
My cold lips scream out in whisper,
I miss you,
The beautiful sorrow, hidden"
An interesting relationship recorded in verse. Thanks for sharing
sharyn

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2008-04-25 12:02 PM

So beautiful, haunting and sad. You have touched me.

A

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