Open Poetry #42 |
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Felix's Final Letter To Angelo |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania ![]() |
Don’t miss me son, no don’t miss me. I’m gone, but I’m here with you. Just look out the door. I’m the dirt and litter in the street. I’m the rotting garbage in our stinking back alley. Open you window, and breathe me in. I’m the pollution of a thousand trucks and busses moving and moaning up and down Allegheny Avenue. I’m here for you always, and I leave you this, our beloved city— make it yours. Bobby |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Very powerful write! Inspired-8 |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Inspired-8, Thanks for the very kind words. We have to have Felix die in the end of the book. I'm pleased if you like Felix and the gang. Bobby |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
oh, sadly happy time. It will remember Felix as a place that once served as his rocker. right? Enjoyed the read. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
noooo.... it's way too soon to have our dear Felix leave us Bobby!! this is too sad.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
I am going to truly miss Felix, but perhaps reincarnation ![]() sharyn |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Seoulair, Now don't panic. I write all my books scatter-shot. Nothing is in natural progression. Felix is sticking around for a while. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear RDB, Don't worry Hon, Felix will be around for a while. I only have about two hundred pages written so far. Felix is good for another hundred. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear Sharyn, Thanks for your kind words on the series so far. There's more to come. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ok, now I can smile again Bobby.. thank you x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Raw, soulful realism! I love it! Art |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Noone else says it like you do, Bobby Ida |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Well at least when he does die, no one can say he hadn't lived. I hope there are many more pages of his life to come. Joyce |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Don't know that I've ever told you, but I've always enjoyed your raw, real, razor sharp vision of reality. Excellent write! R |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear RDB, Keep on smiling. Felix has a few more tricks up his sleeve. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Art, I'm very pleased that you enjoy hearing about Felix. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Ida, What a kind thing to say about Felix's story. Thanks from Felix and Bobby. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Joyce, Yes, and Felix has enjoyed every minute of his life. He still does, he's way lucky. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Robert Frazier, I'm lucky. All I have to do to get inspiration is look out my window, and keep my ears open, here in the hood. I'm glad you enjoy knowing about Felix's life. Bobby |
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