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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Love is two people who embark the same ship for treasure islands, Sometimes Love is a story to tell to children or a car to drive in the desert, Love is a fight to free inner kingdoms or cross a new frontier, But above all when I think of you Love is the truth you teach about you. [This message has been edited by 2islander2 (04-15-2008 03:33 AM).] |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Love is the truth you teach about you. Very interesting thought. Very interesting thought. Are we good student?  Beautiful poem. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wow! yann, This is very good. I see you learning and growing with every write. Ida |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Yann~ Two is such a special number~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts on love...James |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
very novel images to convey love but I think the ending is the best. Good writing sharyn |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
nice write, enjoyed JJ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you all my dear poets, Seoul, Ida, Marge, James, Sharyn and JJ for your kind comments.... yann |
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