Open Poetry #42 |
Felix Is A Hoodlum |
Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Felix is a hoodlum. Everybody knows it. The parents tell their children, “Stay away from Felix”. Felix is the most popular kid in the school. Everyone wants to be his friend. Bobby |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like my ex-husband |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Passing shadows, Hey, come-on now, Felix is just a kid. He might be a hoodlum, but he's just small, and harmless. He's a good guy. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Felix seems more like a victim of circumstance than a hoodlum to me. Ida |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Everyone wants to be his friend. yes, Bobby, I would be Felix's friend any day... love RDB Thank you for your lovely comments to my work - I do so like the 'yo RDB' bit Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Kids everywhere just seem to like whatever their parents don't. Really true... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Bobby, I didn't say my ex-husband was a bad guy...he's a good guy too like Felix lots of friends, and lots of women oh well |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Ida, What you say is true. I’ll never forget how one of the parents in the hood described me when I was young: “He someone that lives to fight, and fights to live.” Yo RDB, Felix says thanks, he needs all the friends he can get. Simon, What you say is very true, and that’s many times the way it should be. There is no way for parents to understand kids that are not their own, but there children can. Passing shadows, That’s a shame hon. No one should pull that kind of crap on another person. It’s not right. Thanks all for the kind comments. Bobby |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
your initial posts (and the subsequent 'comment/reply' posts they garner) get more interesting all the time! [they help contribute to the makings of a rather diverse and lively 'open' forum!] continuing applause for Felix's 'story!' |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Secondhanddreampoet, There you go, making me blush again. It's great that my work is so well recieved. It's fun to be here. Thanks for the very kind words. Bobby |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Much Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Artic Wind, Thanks for the kind words. I happy you enjoyed it. Bobby |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
I am glad that Felix has many friends in school. But no matter what, I feel sad, just sad. |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
TomMark, Yes, Felix's early life was very sad. However, as he got older, things got easier. All my books have happy endings. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It is interesting how "the everybody knows it" can sign a person, a child, who sometimes as a reaction to the judgement really becomes aggressive. He takes initiatives and the other children arrive to admire him. Your story continues to make us ponder, dear Bobby. Well done! love Margherita a smile for Felix |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I'm giving away my age when I say I remeber Felix the Cat in the comics. He predated Garfield by far and yes he was a lovable hoodlum. Only Felix I have ever heard of but I think I recognize the type. Hooray for Felix. Joyce |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Margherita, You got it. You speak the truth. Felix says thanks for the smile. The Felix of the world needs all the smiles they can get. Joyce Johnson, Yes, I too remember Felix the Cat. Felix says thanks for the hooray. Bobby |
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