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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there was an island of padres like the brown fur of hounds they were matted in the sun waters forgiving the sins of the sky we were the heathen boats rubbing our ends together there at their wooden windows our anchors were discarded we drifted where we dreamed and wore our splinter sides smooth they moaned songs of our urges and the storms we rode oarless they made crosses from violets and draped our bows when we slept they blessed us and cursed us then were quiet in their piety but we tempted them with our dawns ______________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
beautiful and tempting Mr Daark... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Nice imagery and I love the consistency of the structure. Thank you for sharing Sharyn |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
our anchors were discarded we drifted where we dreamed ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh boy, I like how this skims the surface. Sigh me a river baby!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, thanks lady for the eyes _____________ ms shyvl, thank you for the touch ________________ ms bluezy, thanks hon for slipping in behind the whispers |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Oh, how deeply these words speak to me right now, dear D.! oarless ... yet somehow divinely guided we always arrive where we are meant to arrive. You are the Poet! Love, Margherita  |
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