Open Poetry #42 |
The Sy of Goodbye |
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
The Sy of Goodbye By Larry Chadwick I'll always adore you My heart resists the Sy of goodbye, Wishing the need were not real. Knowing it would come some day, Denying how that day would feel. But now the time is here, And my heart longs to Sy. Accepting the truth of loss, My mind forcing me to try. Then words and images arise, Isabel’s love and rhyme well written, And the things that Sy would try, For the girl by whom he was smitten. As I pause to reassess it is then I detect a smile in my tears. Faithful was the gentle man, Who loved his wife all these years. And so I accept the Sy of goodbye, It came so easy just using the Sy of try. January 26, 2008 If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Larry, the "Sy of Goodbye" ...so warmly sighed! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Larry ~ you sy, I sy, we all sigh for the Sy Guy. I have a knowing that he is enjoying these poetic outpourings of love. Even our Sy Guy is sighing. I can sense the love ~ and the loss ~ in your heartfelt words. Love & Everlasting Life, Linda |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I loved your title Larry ... right through to the tender thoughts within the poem. Sy was a dear man, and we will miss him greatly. Best wishes and big hugs, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Larry~ You've touched us all with this tender 'Sy'~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
speechless... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Larry I believe this Sy will linger with you throughout your days ~ as a friend in your heart. Alison |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Larry, You've encompassed the poet who wrote both for men and women in one fell swoop. I cannot think of a poet here who hasn't been touched by our Sy. Thank you, m'friend. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful words...he was a special man with a beautiful heart... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Larry darling man, you Sy so beautifully. As always you know exactly how to write the feelings of my tears, YOU too are one of the few. Typing is not easy these days, increasingly I am having to use voice recognition software which doesn't recognise very much. However Sy is worth the pain of typing, and so are you darling man. I vist sometimes, and wander the halls of recall, in the archives, and remember the friends I have still who walk these halls of wonder. Love and warm stuff as always Mushy x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds but I can face the future with courage brave and bold Footprints In My Heart Kethry |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Larry, this is absolutely beautiful. It is indeed so hard to accept that he is gone. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
The Sy of try.....that is what I will remember as. well as his gentleness, humility and humor. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Such a wonderful tribute to this icon of Passions. I miss his terribly already. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Larry, wow this is perfect! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your expression of sorrow is heartfelt. Yes he will be missed by many for a long time Liz |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
When I got off work and realized that I missed your call I came here to see if I had missed something. And now, I will continue to miss something... to miss him. This was a beautiful tribute to a kind man who touched all of us. - I think we all need as many as we can get right now. God bless you. ~alyssa Hupomeno. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
"My heart resists the Sy of goodbye" I didn't have the opportunity to meet him, but he planted sounds, thoughts, and music in my head, making me a better person in the time I spent lingering on his words. You expressed the Sy of Goodbye so well, Larry. Thank you. cathy |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very true Larry, you have penned so well how many of us feel...We have suffered a loss. Barry |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just tagging for my library - thank you Larry. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Larry, I think it a perfect title M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful title... beautiful poem... and a fitting tribute for a man who will be so greatly missed. Thank you, Larry... so very much. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This was a lovely tribute to a man who touched others. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Earl, in many ways, he still does. Missing you, Sy... and thanking Larry once again. |
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