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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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hair, like life so hard to control frustrating until letting go ending up with tumbleweed blowing any way the wind sees fit to take it fumbling for the right look acceptance from an unkind world in cubes running numbers numbers running jumbled, illogical band aids people silently shouting to be on stage, spotlight shine on forehead, a target growing enough to understand a suit of facade will not a mark in history make midday hour full of sweating out the frustrating foreplay for a love that always gives making the rest of cube day bearable Spanish words penetrate the drive from one world to another four digit code gains entrance to meditation of family tumbleweed relaxing at last __________________________ *fk* "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Lol, This made me smile, good poem. -Angel. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
laughing, I was halfway through this and I paused and thought, I'm just gonna leave my girlie an *fk* and there it was... That windblown hair looks good on ya! (dyed mine) *teaser*  I'm gonna go put me to bed! love you! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 I permed mine and well remember that witch on the bugs bunny cartoons that always had bobby pins flying out of her hair?? yeah.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know that tumbleweed... it often gets tangled up on barbwire... which is not like telephone wire although at times you can hear it sing in the wind...  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Angel and Karilea! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
This also made me smile, Susan. I guess we can all relate to tumbleweed and just like life it's sometimes better to just ignore it. Easier said than done though. Enjoyed your words. Helen |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I feel like I am watching the tumbleweed tumble and smiling. A |
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