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For a lifetime or two...
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For a lifetime or two... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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Just for a lifetime or two that was your wish you said then you smiled and your eyes sparkled in that come hither way and then you kissed me for all to see and the not so proper of me let the inner girl free so the moment could linger just long enough to hear your whispers silence my thoughts Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (04-12-2008 06:48 AM).] |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
This was very romantic and sweet. the details were moving and well expressed. sharyn |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Roniece, how absolutely delightful! Sigh ... for a lifetime or two would be great ... and still we yearn for eternity! This is love's prerogative. Enjoyed this beautiful offering very much. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Roniece how romantic is your poem, thank you for sharing my friend poet.... yann |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sharyn, Margherita & Yann... thank you so much for leaving your wonderful comments on my work... you smile me ..  love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, it seems something public would be lovely with you..but one might get in trouble? enjoyed your romantica here. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, you are most probably right Mr Daark... damnit, that good catholic school girl will just have to stay! thanks for your comments... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful romantic feelings flowed through your pen Hope |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
this is a sweet emotion put into words.nice to know there is these emotions alive clever talks delay friendship! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A wonderful style for sharing special moments...James |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
RDB...For You .  . |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear RDB, Nice going Hon. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hope.. thank you so much x Ku... thank you, that was a lovely comment James... thanks lovely James x John... ah! bisous pour moi? merci beaucoup!! you are sweeter than honey! Bobby... thank you for reading my work Bobby, it means a lot to me xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
My God RDB, do you ever not write perfection? This took my breath away! Just absolutely GORGEOUS! Tammy<333 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Tammy... you know I am so pleased you are here with us on these pages blue... you smile me with your lovely comments and I do thank you ... love, your friend RDB xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
very sweet. love the read. |
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