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minna83 New Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 3fitchburg mass |
Trapped Have you ever felt like you can’t move? That’s me I’m trapped in my chair I am buckled in from my chest to my feet Why? Because I can fall out of my chair I want to scream I want to cry I want to yell But will anyone hear me Or is the world to busy No guys will date me Because of my disability I have friends But they live far away So I’m trapped Sometimes I feel like I am alone I feel rejected My dad’s in heaven My sisters are busy So who pays attention to me? My niece Siira My pca Dale and Tami My mom is always busy with her boyfriend So I am trapped in my wheelchair and body I hate it But I manage I know the trapped feeling will go away But right now that’s how I am feeling © Minna April 11th,2008 i am me |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Welcome Minna to our pages blue.. you will find many friends here... I enjoyed your expressive style of writing.. feeling this way can't be much fun for you ...I hope to read more of your work soon... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi Minna and welcome. I hope we can help you feel less trapped with our communication. There are lots of nice people on this site to talk to. I hope we can make you feel less lonely. Ida |
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NeonKnight Junior Member
since 2008-04-12
Posts 36New South Wales, Australia |
very expressive, a little bitter sounding, though that isn't a bad thing in poetry, emotion is one of the most important things when writing poetry i think. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Minna, I was really touched by your poem, i hope to read more of you... yann |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
you have used your words to unveil emotions quite nicely clever talks delay friendship! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Minna, When one uses their mind to express their feelings the way you have, they do not remain trapped for long. Welcome to Passions! We are so very glad that you've found our little home of blue walls and great friendships, not to mention some fantabulous poetry and prose, plus lots of those who participate in some very insightful discussions and theories. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions, Please come play in the light. You sound like a very courageous spirit, and a wonderful model for all of us. Welcome  |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Hi Minna & welcome to passions... you know, if guys wont date you because of your disability, you are better off without them..I am sorry that you are so afflicted however, you more than make up for any physical limitations by your obvious mental agility. Your condition I assume can be seen, the minions that would not take you out to dinner are far more handicapped that you ever could be...I would have no qualms with taking you out to lunch, you paying??  Stick around and have some fun with us in here, we don't get out much either! ( However,in my case it is because I'm way too ugly & would put folk off their dinner  ) Cheers, John |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Minna83, I really like your work. You are truthful, and honest. Two essential attributes a person must have if they are to write effective poetry. I'll be looking for more of your work. Bobby |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Beautifully expressed, I have had the same feelings, you are not alone in your disability! You will find many friends here. Welcome to Pip Hugs Kimberly |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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minna83 New Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 3fitchburg mass |
thank you for your comments, I know it's bitter but thats how I feel is trapped in my chair but I know I will be fine.. |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Welcome to the blue pages filled with hope Minna… You will find much friendship and warmth here… Your poem is beautifully expressive… your feelings are true, keep painting them out… This piece is gorgeous. Tammy<333 |
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