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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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today may be just elevens again a blending of blendigo arms length metaphors perhaps leaning on a bar sipping time letting the gurgling sounds of a swallow building her nest cause one to layer her layers less deeply than values contemplation of entwining wine with the more solid daydreams and putting her fingers together between each other's strangers does god really give us signs or do we build them ourselves there at the tinkertoy disney town where only we can make happen happen and if I said I dare you, would you _________________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
hmmm... I think, if you dared everyone on here Mr Daark.. they most likely would say yes! enjoyed this ... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: y'know, without a ? I can only wonder at the question left unspoken. You've got to lay it out, y'know...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, thanks lady friend..so what was your answer? _______________ ms sun, sometimes it is fun to just ask and watch the shocked look..but something about planting the thought perhaps? thanks hon |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
is it the possibility of walking on water that keeps us from drowning or do we rise like communion wafers on the tides of open mouths, where we melt into each other for our salvation. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi, perhaps begging for forgiveness as we teeter from our swollen fences? thanks babe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Too true, D, too true. Even a raised eyebrow would probably make you grin. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...as long as it was followed by a wink? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such great imagery and so much to consider in this one, dear D.! I am positive that God "does give us signs" and it is quite wonderful to be aware of this. Love, Margherita |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Assuming that wasn't a hypothetical question my answer would be yes. There was a time,,,,,, I like this part the best..... "does god really give us signs or do we build them ourselves there at the tinkertoy disney town where only we can make happen happen" Just perfect!!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms vandana, thanks lady for the eyes _________________ ms mar, thank you babe for reading and touching too _________________ ms angel, thank you julie for letting your thoughts drift and the yes too. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I would your words are beautiful as always D. Lee J. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms leej...you are lovely as always ...thanks babe |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
This one makes me feel unsure… questioning, and yet at the same time confident… Tammy<333 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms larry'smom...then just say yes and see where it leads you...thanks ms |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
enjoyed the read. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend souelair, thanks for the read |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Dunno, D. Sometimes, I am not one to say 'no' but I will change the subject. (grins) - but that's just me. I really love these lines _________________________ does god really give us signs or do we build them ourselves there at the tinkertoy disney town where only we can make happen happen __________________________ Definitely something to think about. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, go ahead and say it..my ear muffs are on...thanks little one |
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