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Snow song |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * Snow song * Out there in solitude me and the snow feel One. Purity and perfection on every snowflake’s uniquely shaped lace. Upon my tongue like divine delicacies the white clusters dissolve. As if still a child I prance in a merry-go-round doing the fluffy dance. Every step on the ground stirs the spirit of snow to release its joyful sounds. Scrunching in delight in duet with my soul we sing the snow song. Out there in solitude me and the snow feel One ... with All there is. Can you hear our song? Nature speaks in many ways to tell us where we belong. * thank you Alison for the inspiration: /pip/Forum105/HTML/000150.html Love, Margherita  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita- Beautiful words! ARCTIC WIND |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I remember singing that song but there's no snow in So. Cal. Very pretty words. Ida |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
we had snow twice that I can remember here in Florida...not much to even make a snowball, but the flakes were incredible! beautiful write that reminded me of those times |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And so comes the snow...James |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Really nice. Can't feel romantic about snow though, it's horrible, really cold & causes traffic bedlam! |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I love your exhuberant snow song at this time of year. Snow is awesome just before Christmas, but by February, it's one more blast to get cleaned off the walks and driveways, delaying spring's enterance. Slush splashes up shiny cars and stains our boots and shoes as excitement dwindles. Thanks for your dance of thankfulness, reminding us of it's beauty once again. Rae |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Margherita, I really like the lines: “Scrunching in delight in duet with my soul we sing the snow song.” It’s nice to know someone besides me likes snow. Kinda. Bobby |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, enjoyed your take of a chilled pleasure |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
feels warm in your snowsong |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Margherita - this is simply divine! love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am especially fond of the photo.-imagery in this 'write' as well as: "Purity and perfection on every snowflake’s uniquely shaped lace." and: "Can you hear our song? Nature speaks in many ways to tell us where we belong." Applause!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It's a joy to find so many of you in here with your loving comments. Thank you so much. Yes, I remember, there are also negative aspects about the snow, no doubt! But I was focussing on its radiance, because I have truly wondrous memories which will forever be cherished. love and joy Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, the joys of snow! I'm a regular little snow bunny! I love snow! ~ and that't a good thing because we are inundated with it!  "Nature speaks in many ways" ~ and you, dear poetess, lend your voice to Nature's beauty through your poetic words. Love to you and to Mother Nature! Linda  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita, my friend This is absolutely wonderful. I feel the same way! I love snow, especially the fresh, fluffy, clean white drifts. When I was little we made snow ice cream from that snow. After, making angels, trails, and playing outside for hours. I love snow still - and I love this poem. We are all lucky to have you among us - you are a very beautiful woman and friend. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Linda Angelo Terrestre and dear Alison!! I enjoy your replies and both of you! love and hugs Margherita |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Haven't seen enough snow in my life to pick up this kind of vibes...it is beautiful, I know by out-weighed by the cold, my friend...yet, anyway. Beautifully written though... jwesley |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
I can hear the sound LOUD and CLEAR! We have more snow than we know what to do with. However, I have acquiesced and allowed myself to read your absolutely beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing. hugz, Marti Life is a celebration of awakenings, of new beginnings, and wonderful surprises that enlighten the soul. --Cielo |
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