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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2008-04-08 09:27 AM

Thoughtful Imprecision

Tuesday’s child appears so wild
Lost in serenade of vespers dawn
While the air swells in disbelief
Each breath steals my heart

Divergent rain in fingers fane
Must trace the sun to guide
Singing into sight; adoration
Slow and steady, drawn and ready

Turning to these open arms
The storm given up until empty
Do not speak the moment that I seek
But be; the warmth to shine in me

Copyright Kkh 4/8/08

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-04-08 11:06 AM

quote:
Turning to these open arms
The storm given up until empty
Do not speak the moment that I seek
But be; the warmth to shine in me

Wonderful, dear TD! No one can resist such a heartfelt, powerful and poetic invitation!

Love,
Margherita

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2008-04-08 12:52 PM

Thought provoking too..

Nice to see you TD.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

3 posted 2008-04-08 04:34 PM

Beautiful writing...

Tammy<333

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

4 posted 2008-04-08 05:14 PM

Good Job Kathleen, I wondered where you had got to...John

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2008-04-08 09:23 PM

Enjoyed the read, my friend...as always.

jimmy

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2008-04-09 07:40 AM

poetic Writting Indeed TD!

ARCTIC WIND

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

7 posted 2008-04-29 10:26 PM

Your poetry, and you, just as wonderful as I remember.

Rich

Freedom of expression is our, write.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2008-05-01 01:30 PM

neat title, but I cannot quote the best or favorite part, as it is all spectacular

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

9 posted 2008-05-01 01:40 PM

"Do not speak the moment that I seek
But be; the warmth to shine in me"

Love the poem but more especially the above.

Helen

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2008-05-03 04:27 PM

You, my frend...are a wealth of words
which become the paint upon your canvas.

Always a pleasure reading you.

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

11 posted 2008-05-04 09:08 PM

Your way with words is soft and heart filling. A pleasure to read
sharyn

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