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monday and 3rd avenue |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the giggle grins were almost innocent but you were a woman with long legs that had crossed the street even before staying in practice for the journey when hurry steps in high heals would heal the waiting winter of man I was but a sign to guide you and you used me wisely and often keeping the dry runs lubricated something about my voice you said when I said go do it again and more that made the dance more lovely you said but the stone of me could only listen __________________ daark |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I was but a sign to guide you and you used me wisely and often" don't we all have our individual guides? Nice work on this, as usual.  how you doin' D?"too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Such an enticing plan filters through your words. Meanwhile you listen, and you listen intensely! Love, Margherita  |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
dare she speak of it, lest doing so proves to be beyond her powers. Caught between a rock and a hard place as it were...mmmm. Indigo |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
wonderful read as always. You are very artistic in expressing....you don't talk, you point and hint...I have said too much. enjoyed. |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
This one makes me feel as though I am off and running on a quest with direction, yet every now and then taking a twist or turn to add excitement… Just how it makes me feel… Beautiful as always Daark, Tammy<333 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
just wonderful Mr Daark... wonderful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
nice JJ |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dark Stranger, Making that "heels", as in foot, would make the word play better. Bobby |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
as usual...awesome. j. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms susieC, thanks babe for the eyes ______________________ ms mar, thank you so much lady friend _______________________ ms indi, rocks and hard places how they pulverize the solutions between them..thanks babe ____________________ soeulair, thank you friend for the read ____________________ ms Larry'smom, thank you so much Tammy for the read and comments ______________________ ms r&b, thank you lady friend, you bless me ______________________ hiddensmiles friend, thank so much _____________________ bobbyJ, thanks for the input _______________ jwesley, thanks friend for the review |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderfully Written and EXPRESSED!! ARCTIC WIND |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Lovely. The dances in life really are our dessert. I love to dance. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
a&w, thanks for the eyes my friend _____________ ms ali-san, thank you little dancer |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
I enoyed this very much. Thanks for the pleasure. sharyn. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sharyn, humble thanks for the touch of your eyes ms |
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