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Beyond Today's Recall
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Beyond Today's Recall |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Beyond Today's Recall Did you know, in the dreamscape of things when the light is just right, I see your shadow blending with mine, have wondering thoughts always, needing to know wanting to share... Can you hear me murmuring, feel the sighing of my breath, the pulsing of my heart whenever I am in your arms? I am always one thought away from you, trying to bridge that gap before the night settles in. I am forever but a look beyond tomorrow, a blossom in full giving in to need, always in your hold, waiting out time, hopelessly weaving my words. I've yet to dance with you, walk in the rain, or in the moonlight, or close the night upon the day with you. If I stopped right now, I will never know the real of you, but I will have known the love I feel, whenever I look into your eyes beyond today's recall. M * retitled |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sounds like a keeper when words as such evoke such devotion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful feelings here |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
~*~ Yes! You look lovely in Spring. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
I'm liking this a lot Maureen.... John |
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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines |
"..I've yet to dance with you, walk in the rain, or in the moonlight, or close the night upon the day with you. If I stopped right now, I will never know the real of you, but I will have known the love I feel, whenever I look into your eyes beyond today's recall. " deep inside my heart, i have these longings.. the longing to save the last dance for someone who's been gone so long.. to walk in the rain holding his hands, and sleep, and wake beside him.. and your poem just made me feel sooo right. i love it. thank you for such wonderful thoughts. forgive and forget, live without regrets. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Such a beautiful dreamscape and loving thoughts Hope |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Like chocolate for the heart. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely Writing, Maureen. Ida |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Maureen, One of your finest, I think, but that may be difficult to say, because you write so well! While I stopped by, I wanted to thank you for your comment on my poem. My summer has been going quickly and almost spent, as I usually begin preparing my classrooms in a few weeks. I hope your year goes well, too! ~cathy~ |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Whoops! (I'm getting a little rusty from my absence from the Blue Pages. I wanted to save this! Click! "Saved!" Have a terrific day and fourth of July weekend! ~C |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Nostalgic and aching, but lovely. I am hoping this isn't a current one and that you are not in such pain. - Owl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I am forever but a look beyond tomorrow" This line jumped out at meet, M. IWIWT! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very touching write Maureen Much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love the warmth in this, my friend...the need and yet, the completeness... j. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
the windows to such recall are the eyes which share depth and heart of one's soul .... ... I think your own is showing!!  Great to read you .... agaon and again ... CT |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This 'write' is quite superb! very serious and long-sustained applause for this grand-fine 'penning'! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you for reading and responding...I totally forgot I posted this one...I appreciate all of you!!!  M |
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