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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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It is in the moments of quiet That I hear my heart the most I'm a silent dreamer I guess I've always been To afraid to shout out the words My heart about to break Release me...foolish dreams Time has not been a kind friend Light and dark continue Continue to play their favorite game Colors surrounding me, flashing before my eyes Is this confusion...peace....I simply do not know I listen for the words not said Perhaps those words are better left unsaid I wait for sweet release Knowing it may never come What am I hiding from Why do I continue to run long after I'm tired There is no point in reaching For something that was never there I stare at the bare wall As I hear the clock ticking It serves to remind That I lost something that was never mine "Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away" [This message has been edited by Aimster (02-02-2008 07:38 PM).] |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I stare at the bare wall As I hear the clock ticking It serves to remind That I lost something that was never mine ... Good writing - it's hard to see part of our lives move on and away. You write about how it feels very well. A |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
very Powerful write! ARCTIC WIND |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I listen for the words not said ~*~ So do I, Amy! |
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Brian23 Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 73Belfast, Ireland |
That poems resonates how I feel about life sometimes. Nice to know I'm not alone feeling such things and to see the feeling crafted into verse. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
ty all...your replies touch me deeply! The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return. |
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