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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
wind rushes with out a care in every direction and everywhere i hear it against my window and feel it in my hair its blowing things down taking all it can and making them bow before him it leaves in peace after making the damage that is left in its place until the wind comes again it will be calm JJ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely perceptions of the wind, dear hiddensmiles! Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love the sound of wind and the feel of it against my skin and blowing in my hair. Your poem vividly brought those sensations to mind! Thank you for that!  PS I even make recordings of wind on windy days. I open my bedroom window slightly and record the whistling sounds which I can play back on nights I have difficulty falling asleep. I find them so soothing.  EA |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I like the ways this ends: "until the wind comes again it will be calm" |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Very nicely structured and you chose your words well keeping every thing short and to the point. It was a very good description of the wind in my world too. "God made you as you are |
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lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams Junior Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 35 |
nicely written *****dreamer***** |
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