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A Cold Day Dawns ( Falling rains' challenge)
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A Cold Day Dawns ( Falling rains' challenge) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
To wander through this vast expanse a captive heart enthralled, bereft of human contact, by one's own emotions walled in glacial drifts carved by a look and cold uncaring smiles, of eons spent in true remorse for fools and frigid wiles. Encapsulated by this cold unchanged to a degree, a love like winter without spring such is your legacy. But, know what you've consigned to ice another life ago's like none I'll wager ever since, its depths you'll never know. A love like winter without spring preserved for all of time, forever now beyond your reach, that's payback, most sublime. [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (04-04-2008 06:22 PM).] |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
You have enormous powers of description. The imagery fits the message so effectively that I am drawn into the scene! Art |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Art, Lol, thanks for saying so, but now, having been granted such powers, must I pledge to only use them for "good"? Doc |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
There's a power behind this excellent write, Doc. Ida |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Ida, Thanks. Doc |
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