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a stupid look
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a stupid look |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
She stared at me in my car, then stared at me when I got off my car, I looked hard at her but she didn't understand and stared at me again until i closed the door of my house. Staring like that was a shame. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Imagine, dear Yann, how much she would stare knowing that you have written such a cute poem about her staring at you! It is intriguing after all, you noticed and though you title it "stupid", maybe there was more behind that look ... but obviously you don't want to see it. Love, Margherita  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi Margherita, some days i'm sensitive to the absurdity of some looks....Most of time i don't care....I understand what you mean but i'm not in the mood now... have a nice day yann |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
well my Mom always told me it was rude to stare.... you have expressed your thoughts well my sweet Yann.... your postcard should be arriving soon - I hope it brings a smile love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
nice little poem. But who was the she? enjoyed. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Roniece, I totally agree with you, it's rude to stare even if we don't do it at purpose.... Hello Seoulair, thanks for sharing comments, i really didn't know her and was wounded...May be i should get some rest... Yann |
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