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Open Poetry #42
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Brian23
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since 2007-11-03
Posts 73
Belfast, Ireland
0 posted 2008-04-02 11:01 AM


I can put these words upon this page, yet what page?
For in this generation electrons are the rage.
There is nothing I can grasp or gently touch
To ask if it were so is not much
Though another question I suddenly find
What am I but inert lifeless signals of the mind?
Emotions however they are placed or seen
Seem to be soulless nothings from a lump of protein
I think therefore I am, yes indeed
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gilead
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
1 posted 2008-04-02 11:52 AM

Very existential, Brian23, and very well done!

Best wishes in the wide world of poetry!

Art
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