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Open Poetry #42
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spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
0 posted 2008-04-02 01:10 AM


Cinderella
Such dreams you weave
In a world so harsh
My heart you retrieve

Cinderella
As you float across the floor
A pirouette
As they scream for more

Cinderella
A maiden so fair
In a copycat world
You’re a breath of fresh air

Cinderella
My glass slipper queen
You’ve brought me much love
More than I’ve seen

Cinderella
My fairy tale girl
Mother of my kids
You are my world

Cinderella
Retrace the night
No more fairy tales
Be part of my life
© Copyright 2008 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
1 posted 2008-04-02 12:29 PM

lovely. enjoyed the read.
poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
Posts 589
india
2 posted 2008-04-02 01:01 PM

you have talent with writing dreams

clever talks delay friendship!
gilead
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
3 posted 2008-04-02 04:52 PM

A very enjoyable read with effective rhyme.

Art
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