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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
im on vacation and i just wrote this its not very good thou the wind from the trees send a gentle breaze as the sand burns upon my feet water chills my body as i dive through its viscosity while the sun set beautiful as a flower blooming the leaves are showing their bright green color as you glimse around everything i describe is of a place called florida and its beauty is pretty cool... JJ |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
very relaxing! A nice cup of tea. Enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...lived their a few years as a child and the memories are cool...James |
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masksrlife Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109Canada |
I feel what your talking about JJ and i miss it so much  lol o will very good right. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
give me envy to swim... yann |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
lol sorry JJ |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
and thank you for your coments JJ |
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