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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we were the gypsy winds in trees there at the edge of our minds undoing things restless we had want to bad shoes on and yours were wet from the puddles that you ran through in moments when I was thirsty for your eyes and those cry sounds of laughter between the pages of your book we said love words out loud from the front row of church and the padre said we sinned but we didn't need to be forgiven _______________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
we had want to bad shoes on and yours were wet from the puddles that you ran through in moments ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ohhh...I have worn want to bad shoes many times.... Understood this one completely Darkdaddy, and loved it. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Sometimes poetry just leaves me washed in silence and sometimes it makes me laugh - okay, I laughed silently. I love this and those shoes - I have a closet full of them. A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...reminds me of a recent news story where a couple was found making love in a church...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes...very beautiful Mr Daark... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
very good, enjoyed. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks babe __________________ ms ali-san, thank you for the touch little friend ____________________ james, thank you sir, seems they found the love that churches preach> _____________________ ms r&b, thanks lady friend ____________________ friend seouliar, thank you much |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: I so love the imagery you bring with your every word ... now I want to run through puddles, careless like a child. This is totally awesome! Love, Margherita  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Let's just put this back on the top. I love it. A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
me too! Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
This brings me visions of beautiful, young love… Tammy<333 |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
pure love sinless and free |
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