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Open Poetry #42

Stained Glass

shooting_rubber
New Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 8

0 posted 2008-03-29 11:26 PM

Hello Everyone,

Here is a poem I recently wrote entitled "Stained Glass". I hope you enjoy.

(STAINED GLASS

People are like a piece of stained glass,
Different pieces, many colours, many shapes.
More often than not we see a different class,
And we sometimes try to escape.

We do not know if we will ever be perfect,
And we sometimes do not see the larger image.
It’s not always possible to predict,
The undiscoverable message.

As the days come and go,
We realize we have no time, never
Like a long time ago
When we thought we’d live forever.

As the days come to an end, it must be known
That we will not be there alone.)

Let me know what you guys think.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-03-30 01:40 AM

Hi

Welcome to P.I.P. - I enjoyed your poem and would like to read more. You have some good thoughts here -

Alison

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-03-30 02:02 AM

welcome to our pages blue... I too enjoyed your first offering to us here... hope to read more... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

shooting_rubber
New Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 8

3 posted 2008-03-30 02:05 AM

Thank you both for your kind comments.

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

4 posted 2008-03-30 06:00 PM

wonderful. Truth.

shooting_rubber
New Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 8

5 posted 2008-05-01 07:49 PM

Thank you all for your kind comments.

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