Open Poetry #42 |
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Fever! Fever! |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india ![]() |
Fever! Fever! Came down upon his fore head The wings of virus Fever! Fever! It came as an angel with destroyed wings At the middle of the night. Settled and set a colony Of desperate invaders. Fever! Fever! Dial the doc. “Yes sir. Fahrenheit 103.5 Analgesic? Power 400?” The alien flower In a pink pot Bloomed to a full golden ash. His memory showed he had been sad When was that? In another life? Fever! Fever! She mopped his head With flavored mint water Still it spread. He never felt the pain Soft green scraped his eyes Closed as they were. Are you listening to me? _ she asked him. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
His memory showed he had been sad When was that? In another life? oh Poddarku... may I call you Po? it's just that I'm worried I might miss out the extra D in your name! ![]() I enjoyed this too... thank you love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
I really enjoyed this... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a fantastic write, poddarku! Smiles Margherita ![]() |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
very, very good. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WELCOME TO PIP!!!!!! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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