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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
The poets on the web are bees in a hive, they produce poems as sweet as honey and their thoughts pollinate the mind. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello, i would like to ask a question : Is there a verb in english which could remplace to make pollination ? yann |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
well I think the last line should read... pollinate the mind... nice thoughts here Yann  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi yann This is a very good poem. Perhaps this would help. "they produce poems as sweet as honey and their thoughts pollinate the mind." Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Roniece, hello Ida, i'm glad you helped me, now this is a collegial (collective) poem, i enjoy that... huglets yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love the end result very much! Nice thought, dear Yann! Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yann, This is a good poem. When I lived in the country I had ten hive. I liked to open the hives, because the bees all over the place reminded me of the city. Bobby |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
yann You write a sweet poem, like honey. I like this a lot. Alison |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Good job Yann....John |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you John, Alison, Bobby and Margherita, i wrote this poem cause this site (PIP) is like a hive...Always busy...You miss a day you miss 40 poems and good ones...I feel like a bee.... yann |
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