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Open Poetry #42

What Can You Do?

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-03-28 06:26 PM

What can you do?
Where can you go?
There is a place
Where you can hide?
What can you do?
You can't do anything
Where can you hide your feelings?
Tomorrow is on the way,
And today is the day
For me to realise
Where can I go from here?
Where can I be your side?
You know
Life is all the matter
To me
What can you do?
If tomorrow comes
And still rain outside
What can you do?
Where can you go?
There is a place
Where you can hide?
If you step outside
and see through the world
You will find a love
Within your heart
What can you see?
Can you see love
In your heart
Can you feel love?

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-03-28 06:34 PM

Beautiful song softly whispering.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-03-29 05:43 AM

lovely Vandana.. lovely

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-03-29 07:07 PM

I think you do make him see and feel love, dear Vandana!

Enjoyed your poem.

Love,
Margherita

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2008-03-29 08:07 PM

Vandana,

I, too, love your questions and think that your poetry shows your heart beautifully.

Alison

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2008-03-29 08:14 PM

Vandana, this shows where your heart lays, my friend...much enjoyed.

j.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

6 posted 2008-03-29 08:44 PM

A lovely post Vandana but oh how I wish we

could get a little of that rain here.

Lindsay

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

7 posted 2008-03-30 11:24 AM

Vandana, I can feel the love, good job John

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2008-03-30 05:20 PM

Nice...James

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