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Arius Miura de Galdri Member
since 2007-07-04
Posts 90Michigan, USA 
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Let me drop a little background here: I've been studying a lot of greek history lately, and I just finished reading "The Histories" by Herodotus. In the back of my copy, there was a poem called "The Oracles" written by E.A. Housman. It was incredible, and it sort of inspired me to write something of my own. Here goes nothing: Valor throughout history has played a vital part It focuses and steels resolve and bolsters weary heart Through myths and tales of ancient deeds, of heroes from of old A valiant tale of courage true has often times been told Of men who struggled fearlessly against o'erwhelming odds Possessing neither mystic tools nor aid from mystic gods With strategy and strength they fought, with shield and sword and spear With heroism, gallantry, and disregard for fear And though their names are lost to Time, the deeds of each live on In noble tale or mournful poem or epic, moving song The men who gave their lives that day forever now will lie Beneath the dust of ages past, beneath Thermopylae AMdG If anyone can think up a good name for this one, please let me know! "My candle burns at both ends; it will not last the night; but ah, my foes, and oh, my friends--it gives a lovely light!" -Edna St. Vincent Millay |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...I pulled some words from the poem..."In Noble Tale"...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I like James' suggestion for the title and enjoyed your words here... Edna St.Vincent Millay is a definite favorite of mine too ... 'what loves my lips have kissed and where and why I have forgotten...: just beautiful! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very well done. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's a good thing when people are inspired by others to pen their own thoughts. You did well with this, and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
An enjoyable read, well inspired. James' title suggestion is very good. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed this, Love Greek mythology. and I am also a fan of Edna St. Vincent Millay. Ida |
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