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Open Poetry #42

Through The Window

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-03-27 07:21 PM

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It is late
Almost the end

Of March
And snow
Is falling

Like old age
Remembering
Youth

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2008-03-27 07:24 PM

Impressive John!! You convey your thought with perfect execution.

I very much enjoyed this, thank you for sharing.

Now, to tuck this into my library.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2008-03-27 09:46 PM

enjoyed as always, John
Ida

BugBuggy
Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 130
michigan

3 posted 2008-03-27 10:05 PM

that was so simple and beautiful...

BugBuggy

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2008-03-27 11:40 PM

beautifully expressed

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2008-03-28 11:41 AM

That's great..

yann

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

6 posted 2008-03-28 12:16 PM

You have a wonderful gift for seeing the world. Your work is the distillation of Matthew Arnold's "sweetness and light".

Art

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