Open Poetry #42 |
Tears |
Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sometimes tears come when I am alone but when I face the world I leave them home and lock the door. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Ida, There you go Hon. I got a kick out of this one. Bobby |
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RC Langill Member
since 2008-03-09
Posts 104 |
A succinct statement of everyday bravery. But do those tears always stay so tightly trussed up? |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
well said! applause!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are a strong woman, dear Ida. Well said, maybe not so easily done. Love, Margherita |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ida, most days thats what I try to do too, but some days they try to sneak out from behind that locked door. Enjoyed this hon. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Very wise move to make Ida, but some times shedding a few tears does ease the pain. I hope today is a great day for you my dear with tears all forgotten. A big warm hug and a bright sunny day. Lindsay |
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SilentSpeaker New Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 6 |
This perfectly describes me. Except that I don't really cry when I'm alone either. Not really something I let myself do "I love you not because of who you are, but rather because of who I am around you." |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all for your lovely comments and I do think a good cry helps sometimes, I just think it doesn't help anyone else to see it. Ida |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Ida... your thoughts are lovely... I can relate ... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
I feel them, hope all is well |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Yes, it's nice to leave them locked up at home when we're out, but keeping them locked up inside us, seems to have a hardening or inner formenting effect. You're right that a good cry can bring healing, too. Nice poem. Rae |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A lot of us do just this, Ida. But few of us admit it. Good job! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ida, You write this so beautifully. A |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all for your comments and yes, KK, evrything is okay. I'm sure you know how it is. Ida |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
nice write! JJ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Ida, i very feel the same Yann |
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