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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2008-03-27 05:58 AM

The heavy grey of day
rolled in cold
to leave bones aching
as coffee steam swirled
in small puffs
consumed by mists,

the world, empty
save the dark sky,
belly rumble
with thunder eyes

for he alone sees
when lady cries

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2008-03-27 06:06 AM

ms gs...enjoyed the shadows here..and a smile that waits too

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2008-03-27 08:33 AM

beautifully haunting

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-03-27 08:58 AM

It is inspiring, dear gentle Donna!

Love,
Margherita

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2008-03-27 10:22 AM

I really loved this Donna...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2008-03-27 10:40 AM

The sparseness echoes the rumble...
well done, little one.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2008-03-27 11:07 AM

Yo Gentle Spirit,

This one works for me.

Don't cry Hon, look on the bright side.

Bobby

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2008-03-27 12:13 PM

This one works for me too, Donna.
Ida

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2008-03-27 03:45 PM

oh
gentle Donna
this one cuts deep

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2008-03-29 01:33 AM

Donna,

I just want to slip in and sit beside you with my cup of coffee and sit quietly with you.

You touch me inside -

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2008-03-29 02:44 AM

the essence of beauty Donna... wonderful! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

11 posted 2008-03-29 03:36 AM

Touching. beautiful poem.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

12 posted 2008-03-29 07:48 PM

"Donna,

I just want to slip in and sit beside you with my cup of coffee and sit quietly with you.

You touch me inside -"

Sorry for copying but Alison said it so much better than I ever could - but believe with my soul.

j.

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