Open Poetry #42 |
Starting Over |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Starting Over I got nothing to give only a few pennies, a ticket out of town, that can take me somewhere I wish I had the grace to smile when I am sad. Couldn't I give smiles? Isn't that worth something! If there was time to give I'd give you everything If you don't expect much maybe I'll surprise you -Juju |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
This is a very beautiful poem. Pure from a young heart. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Some don't expect much, and love surprises...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Starting over is surprise enough sometimes, Juju. There's always something new around the next corner. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Juju, Helen of Troy did wonders with a little smile. Keep on smiling. Bobby |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Even when we have to start over, and even when we don't feel like smiling sometimes we can make ourselves feel better just by smiling. I enjoy your poetry Juju. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Re-inventing, starting over...think of it as a new spring, the natural cycle of life. good to read you again, Juju. Good luck, poet. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
very beautiful Juju... and I'm sure you have a wonderful smile... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
wise and lovely poem. Yann |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Good Juju You've always had a very distinctive voice. John . |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This (you) project nothing short of grace, my friend... j. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
JuJu, you are far richer than you give yourself credit for.... |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Oh my, This poem got allot of responses. (: Thank you everyone for reading my poem. You are all very wonderful. -Juli -Juju |
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