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A Woman In a Bubble Bath
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A Woman In a Bubble Bath |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A Woman In a Bubble Bath Few things look or smell as good as a woman in a bubble bath. I could pass away the hours admiring the sensual. Yes of course, its time to scrub the back, we wouldn't want any dirt to linger, on a back as fine as this, though my hands shall find the time to linger inbetween the well placed strokes. Few things look or smell as good as a woman in a bubble bath... except a woman requesting her perfumed towel and getting out. JamesLee 26March 2008 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 rub-a-dub-dub |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A "perfumed towel"? Ohhh ... quite the prelude, dear James! Love, Margherita  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
James, This is very good writing. Once when I was a little kid, my mother gave me a bubble bath. It was fun. Your poem brought up this old sixty plus-year-old memory. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
thank you Midnitesun, Margherita and Robert for the wonderful responses... I know what you mean Robert...lots of times when I'm reading other peoples poetry it brings up memories of times past...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oooh just lovely James! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Roniece for the wonderful response...James |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very artful... Yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
thank you Yann for the nice response...James |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
It sounded pretty good to me James. Lindsay |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Good Jim John . |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
James, you outdid yourself! This was absolutely wonderful, in every way... Outstanding my friend! jwesley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Lindsay, John and JWesley for the wonderful responses...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bubble baths are the only way to go~~ M |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
And I for one do not believe for a minute you did not climb right on in the Jimbo ! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you nakdthoughts and effjayel... Effjayel my girlfriend will have to tell the rest of this story...James |
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