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Open Poetry #42

mosey town with lime

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-03-25 05:45 AM

counting the white things
against a lover's sky
when the gypsy boats froliced

in their sunday best afternoons
and we didn't realize before us
that afternoons were our songs

they started out undressed up
and moved into lazy kinds of easy
holding our mind eye's attention

when we were just loose shirts there
making shadows on the dunes
and the sun was moving behind

leaving us with extra long evenings
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daark

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-03-25 06:10 AM

hmmm... has your time zone changed Mr Daark? or are you up extra early these days?

enjoyed your write here... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2008-03-25 09:40 AM

lazy kinds of easy
make for a good Tuesday

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2008-03-25 10:43 AM

"when we were just loose shirts there
making shadows on the dunes
and the sun was moving behind"

soft and snuggly

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-03-25 12:35 PM

Dear D., when "afternoons are songs" and "evenings are extra long", it means some nice things are happening.

You convey sunshine here and stir some undefinable longings.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2008-03-25 05:10 PM

ms r & b....time did change..but I am always up early thanks ms

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ms sun, thanks lady for the eyes

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ms suesea, thanks babe for touching me here

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ms mar, thanks lady friend for the eyes and smile sides of you

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