Open Poetry #42 |
Simply Put |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Think about me when you are far from here. Hear the sounds of my whisper calm and clear. You are nearer than you realize. Close your eyes, remember the sighs as you held me tight and I basked in your light. Everything in the world was right. When you are far from here think about me. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like a plan...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just to be thought about in that way would be enough~~ M |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Gentle Spirit, This is very simply put. It works well as a poem. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
beautiful Donna! Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
soft and romantic. A love song sang from a tender heart. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you each for stopping by this one and leaving your thoughts. You are appreciated. Hugs. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Another tender offering, I love your whispers of love. Hugs. Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Margharita, and Dixie, thank you both for taking the time to stop by. Hugs. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Tender words delightfully written, You wrote it well Donna, A big hug. Lindsay |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This cries with tenderness and poignant longing. I'd bet the intended thinks of you often, with gentle heart-thoughts. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
What is, should be. Knowing deep within you, is what is. |
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