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such a mess |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
When i get bored i don’t sweep my bedroom either put away the living room or sort the papers, I simply write a poem. When i get bored i don’t wash the dishes either clean the kitchen or brush the grey carpet, I simply write a poem. So don’t be fussy or embarassed if my house is such a mess, when i get bored i don’t clean my will, I simply write poetry. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wonder how many others feel the same way  M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I don't know, I go with my girlfriend on this one...when the house is clean, everything else is nicer...nothing like coming home to a clean house...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, the temptations... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi james you're perfectly right, but writing is so much fun and cleaning so boring.... regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi nakdthoughts, i feel comfortable with your comment, someone made me a remark so i wrote this poem, thank you for supporting me. regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you Sunshine.... yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi yann, I would rather write than clean too but I can't really concentrate when the house is a mess so I have to clean and take care of business and then write. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
OK, so we won't give you the Mr Clean award! I enjoyed this, and can relate. Let those dust-bunnies alone, they will still be there tomorrow. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yann, In the English language, the first person, singular personal pronoun "I" is always capitalized, wherever it appears. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
nice write Yann... I don't do kitchens, bathrooms or laundrys either.. that's what my cleaner is for!  I like your thoughts... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks midnitesun, i had fun with your comments, i wish i could give it back.... yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Ida, i always wait for your comments here or on AP.... regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you bobby , you are very helpful... yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Roniece, enjoyed your comment... you live in a so vast country with so few people...It must be awesome.... yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
That's a great idea, yann. Maybe hiring a housekeeper a to come in once a week would free you up to write and do other things. I have a lady come in every other week just to help me with the heavy work. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A good one, dear Yann. When inspiration comes, at least we should immediately jot down a few words to develop later ... if there are impelling tasks waiting. It is nice to have a clean house/apartment no doubt, but sometimes there are creative priorities I would say. Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Than you Ida, i think i must first get out a lot of old things in an appropriate place... Then i think that the idea to hire someone is a good idea....Thanks for your precious comment.... regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello margherita, i'm not proud and i think that you are totally right, when ideas come we must abandon anything otherwise the idea is lost, it is what happened with this poem, i get the idea from my brother who visited me and criticqued the mess....I wanted with this poem excuse myself for the mess... regrads yann |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
when I get bored, I clean maybe that's why I don't write as much as I once did good poem! |
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