Open Poetry #42 |
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Tea Party |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia ![]() |
Sometimes I go to the large cemetery where the sun shines bright ripples sparkle on a peaceful pond graceful swans I sit, sipping tea and in the twilight, watch as rabbits play Sometimes I go deep into the woods to the little graveyard that lies in darkness completely enclosed by rusted wrought iron that never bore a gate and in the early dawn, watch as possums crawl out from beneath weathered headstones carrying bloated bellies and satisfied grins the tea taste the same |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like this Uriah. Not only because I visit cemetaries, but because you've taken the light and dark of it, and blended the strain so very well. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of when I lived in Florida as a kid and when we went deep into the woods behind our house there was a small grave site that was overgrown with the growth of the forest...you could barely make out the gravestones...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
XOx Uriah xOX, This is nicely descriptive. I'd change the last line to: "the tea tastes the same" Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I always enjoy your thoughts, Uriah Ida |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
as do I... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes! I like this! thank you for sharing with us... ![]() Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
There's this distance of observation that is connected in this--and it's peaceful and wise. You've got it goin' on, Uriah. Nicely done. |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
I like what you got going on here a lot. The last line really does it for me. Joe Keep flying to the sun with these gargoyle wings. |
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