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God in a hot afternoon
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God in a hot afternoon |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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God in a hot afternoon --------------------------- Sun is leaping over the cracked fence. Light feet of sunlight Wakes a sick horse chomping a mouthful. Sun, quite full of youth… The horse looks up and returns to food. To a lean belly Grass is god and love, life is chomping. Young sun trespasses To a stretch of land of green twilight Where he shall meet moon. To a searing life, moonshine is god. clever talks delay friendship! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...life is chomping. I had to smile at that, Poddar. Thank you for this smile. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Poddarku, This poem is smooth. I like the idea of "green twilight". Bobby |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wonderful imagery, Poddar! I've seen those horses, intent on 'chomping' in the sunshine. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ok! I am now unsure whether to call you Poddar or Ku??  but I very much enjoyed this poem of yours... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Just so! Very expressive write, holding beauty and philosophical depth, dearest Ku! Love, Margherita |
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