Glimpse Through a Keyhole (duet with Edder)

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

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0 posted 2008-03-21 11:44 PM

Beside the locked door
a woman is weeping
collapsed on the floor
she is slow sliding down
hugging her knees
as to muffle the sound
of the war being waged
inside of her mind
the answer's completion
she struggles to find
the key to the bones
in this closet of lies...

How can her conscience deny?

truth taunts - ghosts haunt

she's slowly consumed

by the roots of the blooms
of the hope others plant
to cover her tomb

for the sake of themselves:

Some people's Heaven
runs right through their Hell.

Edder
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since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

1 posted 2008-03-22 12:09 PM

Thanks for the ride, dear!

I needed something to blow the cobwebs out of my poetic brain.

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2008-03-22 01:07 AM

"Some people's heaven runs right through their hell" I like this.
Ida

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2008-03-22 04:21 PM

Ida? thank you hon.

And Ed? Well, you helped me anyhow.

I guess maybe we shoulda tried writing AT each other instead of with each other.

Thanks for your patience with me, lovie.

All my best to ya.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2008-03-22 09:47 PM

At, With, Beside, Together...

it's all good.

quote:
she is slow sliding down
hugging her knees
as to muffle the sound

but this knows me.

for both of you.

K? Answers, soon.

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2008-03-23 02:52 AM

You sing well together -- I think many of us know this woman. Captivating poetry.

A

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2008-03-23 03:05 AM

Thank you both for this reality write, that involves me emotionally more than I would like to admit!

But probably only by knowing hell we actually can fully savor heaven, when it reveals itself ... it happens after all!

But indeed why?

My compliments for the duet!

Love,
Margherita

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

7 posted 2008-03-23 08:20 PM

ahhhhhhhh 2 of my favs

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2008-03-23 09:08 PM

Isn't he just a lovely guy? It was very much a pleasure to work with Ed.

(and folks, his photography is stunning as well!)

Thanks again Ed. And thank you all for taking the "glimpse".

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2008-03-23 10:02 PM

*sigh*

I love you both.

and loved this duet....it's real. I think we all know it.

*kiss*

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2008-03-24 05:15 AM

Fine writing...James

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