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Open Poetry #42

Beauty of Nature

ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02

Posts 157
GA

0 posted 2008-03-21 02:08 AM

I posted the first part under simple poem, and decided to continue it.

Slight wind cooling Earth while rustling leaves
Warm, steaming hot sun giving to plant life
Nature bestows upon the living
The vitality to endure what is necessary

Blooming of life among the gardens
The sweet aroma gliding through the air
Making its way towards you
Leaving you in a state of relaxation

Anticipating the future of cleanliness
The coming day of no more detritus
Left behind in our own tracks
There for us to look down upon

Wanting to see the everlasting beauty
Of our Earth thousands of years ago
Just the sight of its elegance
To see how beautiful it can become once again

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-03-21 03:42 AM

Blooming of life among the gardens
The sweet aroma gliding through the air
Making its way towards you
Leaving you in a state of relaxation

Very very beautifully rendered and the message is also very wise.

Enjoyed this and inhaled its fragrance of purity.

Love,
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2008-03-22 07:19 PM

fine continuation!

applause!!

simon
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since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

3 posted 2008-03-22 08:44 PM

very nice...

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