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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-03-20 05:59 AM



highways have memories
like finger prints in moment skin
the love words travel
and are parked cars in center lanes

we all see them invisible
and recite them in proper cadence
as we drive by too fast
to know them more than passing

did you build a u turn store
on your sidewalk outside caution
there were your hands seem tied
and your ankles wanted run foot speed

did you reconsider the considering
and slow to maybe so speed
when you saw my eyes at your window
pressing poems on your wiper blades

do you like stop light love on sundays?


___________

daark


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2008-03-20 06:01 AM


and slow to maybe so speed
when you saw my eyes at your window
pressing poems on your wiper blades
Enjoyed this D, especially that last line....nice one.  

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-03-20 07:13 AM


when you saw my eyes at your window
pressing poems on your wiper blades

do you like stop light love on sundays?

yes, I like these lines Mr Daark... very nice... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-03-20 08:58 AM


quote:
highways have memories
like finger prints in moment skin
the love words travel
and are parked cars in center lanes

we all see them invisible
and recite them in proper cadence
as we drive by too fast
to know them more than passing

did you build a u turn store
on your sidewalk outside caution
there where your hands seem tied
and your ankles wanted run foot speed

did you reconsider the considering
and slow to maybe so speed
when you saw my eyes at your window
pressing poems on your wiper blades

do you like stop light love on sundays?



What I really like ... no ... ADORE ... is your poetry, dear D.!

utterly beautiful! ... no ... ASTONISHING.

Take this bow

Oh, and dare not to "drive too fast"! Ever!

love,
Margherita  

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-03-20 05:41 PM


thank you lovely ladies for your touch..ms mar..I bet you are a wild driver..grin
Indigo
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5 posted 2008-03-20 08:02 PM


she's white line reckless
a chariot of headstrong
on darkened highways.

Mmm... fasten your seatbelts. It's going to be a bumpy night.

Indigo

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6 posted 2008-03-21 02:15 AM


D

This is a poem to tuck under a pillow and dream on.  

A

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-03-21 06:05 AM


ms indi, bots dots make it heavenly, thanks babe

___________

ms ali-san, thank you for pillowing my thoughts hon

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