Open Poetry #42 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
highways have memories like finger prints in moment skin the love words travel and are parked cars in center lanes we all see them invisible and recite them in proper cadence as we drive by too fast to know them more than passing did you build a u turn store on your sidewalk outside caution there were your hands seem tied and your ankles wanted run foot speed did you reconsider the considering and slow to maybe so speed when you saw my eyes at your window pressing poems on your wiper blades do you like stop light love on sundays? ___________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and slow to maybe so speed when you saw my eyes at your window pressing poems on your wiper blades Enjoyed this D, especially that last line....nice one. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
when you saw my eyes at your window pressing poems on your wiper blades do you like stop light love on sundays? yes, I like these lines Mr Daark... very nice... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: What I really like ... no ... ADORE ... is your poetry, dear D.! utterly beautiful! ... no ... ASTONISHING. Take this bow Oh, and dare not to "drive too fast"! Ever! love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you lovely ladies for your touch..ms mar..I bet you are a wild driver..grin |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
she's white line reckless a chariot of headstrong on darkened highways. Mmm... fasten your seatbelts. It's going to be a bumpy night. Indigo |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D This is a poem to tuck under a pillow and dream on. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi, bots dots make it heavenly, thanks babe ___________ ms ali-san, thank you for pillowing my thoughts hon |
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