Open Poetry #42 |
Sally and Felix, Slim and Svelte |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Sally’s sixty-six, slim, and pretty as a picture. Felix is seventy-two, svelte, and handsome like a younger man. They get around each day, exercise, and don’t make hogs of themselves at the dinner trough. They look around, and are shocked to see, people so much younger than themselves, and how the youngsters have let themselves go completely to pot. It’s a shame, it really is, and their hearts go out to all the unfortunately gross entities. Bobby |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Booby, I went back to work this week & in the cafeteria today I saw a young girl that was so badly overweight but was wearing the latest stick thin models new line, it was not a pretty sight...now I have to re picture you in my minds eye as svelte, & I'm liking the look....Now, go chase Sally Tiger ! John |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, "ROAR--ROAR" (Tiger sounds to make an impression on the beautiful Sally). Felix is loping along after Sally, all 165 pounds, 6 feet long of him. Thanks for reading, and commenting on this one. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...nice to read that the two of you are living a healthy lifestyle...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
James, Thanks for the very kind words. The human body is a gift from "The Man" that must be cared for. Bobby |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Booby, Sally don't stand a chance! Svelte, 6 foot tall & a smooth talker to boot! Please keep posting... John |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, Thanks for the kind words on this one. Sally's a pretty cool chick, she's very resourceful. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
smiles at you Bobby... what a lovely visual of the two of you ... PS: Tell Sally, she is a lucky girl! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Dear RDB, Sally and Felix smiling back at you. Bobby |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
another VERY important message in this 'write!' applause!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Secondhanddreampoet, Thanks for the kind words on this one. I'm pleased you found it important. There is always hope. Bobby |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I'm so glad that Felix is now a healthy, happy, seventy-two year old. May the Easter Bunny be good to him. Love, Joyce |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Joyce, Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Yes, Felix is a lucky one. Bobby |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Just popping to a) let you know I am still reading and I do like to read Felix's story...and b) to mention that there are people out there with medical reasons for being overweight...something in the bible says something about not judging...what was that? "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Susan, I am aware of that problem. My mother was overweight, as are many of my friends and relatives. I would never judge anyone. I have too many glaring faults of my own. It's only a poem, and I'm sorry if I have offended anyone. Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ya know, I think that Felix is pretty lucky to hold onto a beauty like Sally. They are a great couple. A |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Alison, Sally and Felix say thanks, and send their love. Bobby |
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