Open Poetry #42 |
Angel of Mine |
ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA |
I was going for help, Walking down this rocky pathway. I seem to sense a presence… With this horrible feeling of anxiety I start to walk with more brisk. I hear a noise not far away. I stop in my tracks. And turn around, but it is much too dark, I cannot see anything around me. Suddenly a light forms in the distance. It is coming extremely fast towards me. I attempt to run, but my whole body is numb. Then, in an instant, The blurry sight of this light instantly stops. I see an elderly woman, beautiful as can be In a blindingly white gown She tilts her head and smiles She tells me everything is going to be alright Extending her arm out next to her, I see a ghostly figure of my best friend. She smiles at me... Telling me it was her time, She reaches out towards me with a look of sadness When she gets close, they both disappear into the night Tears streaming down my face Wondering how I could have done this to her... We were both intoxicated I crashed into a pine tree I was trying to go for help in time Walking down this rocky pathway… But it was too late |
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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA |
This isn't about me...it's just something I thought up. The ending kinda takes me back by surprise, lol. But it carries a good lesson to all...don't drink and drive. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...and I like the don't drink and drive message...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Me too. Ida |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
scary... |
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