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Do You Do The Same
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Do You Do The Same |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Do You Do The Same So many paths had led Back to memory lane Here my mind travelled To the places again Stored here in my mind Memories I can view The times remembered I often thought of you Many fond recollections Which I can still find Its here you still remain Forever on my mind Lingering on memories Once more they play I was missing you more Than I did yesterday The feelings we shared Down memory lane Repeatedly I reminisce Do you do the same Hope©2008 The poem with music and graphic at the URL below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91036331.html |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
HopeS, This works well with the nice end rhymes. Bobby |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I like this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you always...always hit on my emotions so exactly.... loved this, and so understand it...  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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RC Langill Member
since 2008-03-09
Posts 104 |
You show how memories such as these continue to provide warmth and even longing despite a separation. Still, you raise the question. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
What would we do without our wonderful memories Hope, It's great to just sit down and reminisce, loved it. Lindsay |
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